tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7920432050136375547.post7017135268471773445..comments2023-10-18T02:37:14.640-07:00Comments on Karen Duvall: Teaser Tuesday - Mystic TaxiKaren Duvallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01839711547501582977noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7920432050136375547.post-2370799549177603322009-04-28T18:07:00.000-07:002009-04-28T18:07:00.000-07:00Nice! Very intriguing with the ghost sickness, the...Nice! Very intriguing with the ghost sickness, the arm and the skunk stripe! It has me hooked! Pacing was well done, and your dialogue is excellent!Erin Richardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14444419544758678045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7920432050136375547.post-41670949537880358852009-04-28T16:10:00.000-07:002009-04-28T16:10:00.000-07:00Really enjoying Wanda's voice, though I caught som...Really enjoying Wanda's voice, though I caught some repetition (calm and calmly) in her first line.Gretchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09327185025020171674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7920432050136375547.post-87611536639932891092009-04-28T15:50:00.000-07:002009-04-28T15:50:00.000-07:00Wow...just as good as the rest of the scene. It ma...Wow...just as good as the rest of the scene. It makes me so involved! Really good job, Karen :)<br /><br />-CACreative Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02960292977608812418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7920432050136375547.post-19233075162108404252009-04-28T10:38:00.000-07:002009-04-28T10:38:00.000-07:00Noooooot gooooood!! Don't think that arm is actual...Noooooot gooooood!! Don't think that arm is actually going to grow back, Henry....haha I just love this story, Karen. So cool, so different. This'll be it for you, I know it!!Courtney Allison Moultonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18385987970902585442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7920432050136375547.post-74368648510093127752009-04-28T09:27:00.000-07:002009-04-28T09:27:00.000-07:00oooh!!!!!Me like!
Great dialogue, spare but says s...oooh!!!!!Me like!<br />Great dialogue, spare but says so much.sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.com