Sunday, March 25, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: A Terrible Loss

Here's a small sample of what I've written on the WIP today:
He approached the bed and ran the backs of his fingers gently down Sally's arm. "I lost them both the same day."
I imagined it was hard for him to talk about, but it was a relief to know he finally felt comfortable enough to open up. He must have a lot of pain buried inside. "Your parents?"
"My wife and daughter."


Elizabeth Parker said...

Those few sentences are very powerful and express so very much. Wow.

Karen Duvall said...

Wow, thanks, Elizabeth! I appreciate you stopping by. :) Hugs!